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WRiTE CLUB 2021 - Preliminary Bout #15


Today we reveal the final two writers who were chosen to participate in WRiTE CLUB this year. Anyone who's followed this contest knows that it is an achievement simply being selected to compete. My hat is off to these 30 amazing writers!

With this final preliminary match, there are now five bouts that still need to be decided. As you recall, the voting for each bout remains open for an entire week, so bout #11 will close this Sunday. If any of these five bouts, you can always catch up.

And for those of you who voted for a particular writer — only to see them lose their battle — they might get a second chance.  Next week is SAVE WEEK (details on Monday), so stay tuned.

Here's a reminder of what is happening. WRiTE CLUB (sponsored by Wild Lark Books) is a tournament-style contest that will run for nine weeks (which includes a week break for the holidays). It provides writers the opportunity to compete against one another for a chance to win a free publication package (along with other prizes). Here’s the kicker—it’s all done anonymously. Writers have submitted 500-word writing samples under pen names. The chosen (decided by a group of twelve slush pile readers) are paired off to go head-to-head in daily “bouts”, with the winner of each match determined by you the reader—by voting for your favorites. Bout winners keep advancing until there are only two remaining and that’s when a panel of celebrity judges, who include well know authors, agents, editors, and other publishing folks, choose the ultimate champion.

Anyone can vote (as long as you have a Google sign-in or verifiable email address), and when you do, we encourage you to leave a mini-critique for both writers. Oh, the voters can win a $50 Wild Lark Books gift card. Each time you vote in a bout your name will be placed into a hat and at the end of the contest, one name will be selected to receive the prize.

How this works—two anonymous (pen name only) writing samples are waiting in the ring below. Visitors to this blog (that’s you) should read both entries and then vote by leaving a comment for the one that resonates with you the most. We also ask that you leave a brief critique for both writers with your vote because that is one of the real values of this contest—FEEDBACK. Please be respectful with your remarks!

Even though there has been a different bout every day (M-F), the voting for each bout remains open for seven days from the date I post it to give as many people as possible to have a say. Voting for today’s bout will close on Thur, Jan 6th (noon central time). To help keep up with which bouts are open, you can follow along on the WRiTE CLUB Scoreboard updated right HERE.

It’s that simple. The writing piece that garnishes the most votes will move on to the next round where they’ll face a different opponent. In case of a tie, I’m the deciding vote. I can do that because, like all of you, I do not know the real names of our contestants either (my wife processes all the submissions).

A few more rules –

1) One vote per visitor per bout.

2) Although our contestants are anonymous, voters cannot be. Anonymous votes will not count, so if you do not have a Google account and are voting as a guest, be sure to include your name and email address.

3) Using any method (email, social media, text, etc) to solicit votes for a specific contestant will cause that contestant's immediate disqualification. What is okay, in fact, encouraged, is to spread the word about the contest to get more people to vote, just not for a specific writer!

That’s enough of the fine print…here we go!



On one side of the ring stands Captain Skyrider representing the Science Fiction genre.

Finley Shaw and her family usually avoided places like Rigley-Beck, a dust-ball planet in a desolate part of the galaxy.

Meeting the contact here was Finley’s first clue that something about this deal wasn’t right.

“Stay alert,” Mom said as they suited up. Mom and Dad tucked blasters and concussion bombs into their gear. Just in case.

Why had they agreed to this? Dad had two rules: never do business with people you don’t know and stay away from illegal clones. This job broke both rules.

Dad said they needed the money, but Finley thought it was something more. Dad had done some shady things when he was young and rebellious. Maybe this was his way of making up for it.

Whatever it was, Finley didn’t like it. But she kept her mouth shut. Questioning Dad’s decisions was pointless when he was so determined. She shouldered her pack and followed Mom, Dad and her older brother Jed down the shuttle ladder.

Rolling terrain, bristling with stunted trees, stretched to the horizon, greyer than anything Finley had ever seen. The wind, smelling of the ammonia leftover from the planet’s terraforming days, blew sand into her face. They headed for a squat corrugated metal building at the edge of the field barely visible through the forest of fuselage carcasses and old ion engines cluttering the front yard. Sand rats chased each other around the hull of an old destroyer half buried in sand.

Who would put a space station in the middle of a junkyard?

Inside, a ceiling fan circled overhead, clicking with each wobbly turn. A man worked behind a counter typing on an ancient-looking keyboard. Eyes bulged in his narrow face reminding Finley of the pop-eye bugs they’d encountered in the Quintero system.

Dad and Mom approached while she and Jed leaned against the back wall.

“What can I do for you folks?” Bug-eye asked, not looking up from the com-screen.

“Here for Stillwell. Cargo pick-up.”

 “Out back.” Bug-eye hooked a thumb over his shoulder.

Dad murmured “thanks” and headed that way. Finley and the others followed. They entered a narrow yard cluttered with more starship wreckage, surrounded by a tall metal fence.

No Stillwell. Mom and Dad exchanged wary looks, putting Finley on edge.

The “cargo” they’d come for huddled in the shadow of a lean-to. Ten or so service clones, dressed in faded civilian clothes, not the usual crisp grey and yellow corporate-clone uniform. They gazed down at their worn boots or stared blankly ahead, clearly miserable. Outside of Interplanetary Council protection, unregistered clones usually ended up working in illegal mines or out-galaxy terraforming projects. But Finley’s family would be delivering this bunch to a resistance group and freedom.

“Let’s just take the clones and go,” Jed said.

“Not till we get paid.” Dad started for a shed across the yard.

Finley barely had time to process what happened next.

The roar of air-strikers and gunships filled the air, approaching fast.

Dad’s eyes filled with panic. “Run!”

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On the far side of the ring, we have Bashert who represents the Romance genre.


Soulmates

 

A fake tattoo pressed upon wetted skin, the sunset sky against the surging sea, ink against a crisp white page— that’s how close we were. Only us, no space in between. We moved in concert, our mouths like jellyfish, pushing and receding, palms against skin, goosebumps upon flesh. Our oxygen dwindling, he pulled back.

I stared into his soft-skinned, olive-toned face.

“Who are you?”

 His eyes were timber, the cinnamon of flames alighting wood in the dark, dark night. His hair was chestnut, flecked with strands of light. Arms still encasing me, muscular vein splitting the middle of his forearms like a taut guitar string.

His eyebrows crinkled as though he, too, was unsure of the answer.

Around us stretched an expanse, a prism of colors flickering and blinking.            Roots floated beneath paper trees into nothingness, pages of books open and murmuring, thoughts and whisperings tied to invisible strings like hanging fruit. It was all so unfamiliar and yet so comfortable, strangely.

“I don’t quite remember….”

He swiveled his head around, searching for clues. With the space left by the absence of his lips, I followed his eyes.

“But I know that I was assigned to you.”

We turned our heads back to each other and our expressions caught in mutual perplexity. Both of us ticked our heads back, turning to one side, and then the other. We each raised an eyebrow, then pursed our lips— mirrors of each other, a reflection of opposites. We stared at each other with a confusion that felt like home.

It was awfully difficult to talk to your soulmate when neither of you knew anything about yourselves.

We could not seem to grasp what we were doing in this place, yet we could not recall being anywhere else.

It wasn’t long before we realized that kissing was the key.

Every time our lips melded, a new revelation surfaced. Eyes closed, tongues pressed together, glimmers of future memories filled the blackness behind our eyes. The recollections appeared distorted, half-blurry, as though reflecting through a crystal prism—the staccato wails of babies crying, tiny boots crunching leaves, grey streets littered with debris. We saw the two of us, in a dim-lit room cocooned by books, youthful hands cradling sleeping beings, wrinkled feet faltering, the echoes of quiet sobbing. Next, we saw the land, a patchwork of ruddiness and green, folded like a pillow beneath our feet. And then there was the taste of dirt, dark and deep, so rich we gulped at each other, desperate to inhale it.

As soon as we surfaced, we asked the question burning both of our minds: What is this place?

It was a sort of “World to Come,” but reversed, the answer arrived, granting only more bewilderment. What was the “World to Come” when we had no knowledge of a “World In The Moment”? Why was it “to come” if we were already in it? And what about the leaking memories?

What had come already?

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Leave your votes and critiques in the comments below. Again, be respectful of your remarks and try to point out positives as well as detractions. 

As I mentioned above, next week YOU the reader will get to give three writers who lost their preliminary bout a second chance during SAVE WEEK. You don't want to miss that!

Finally, in order to keep this contest going AND GROWING, I'm asking folks to donate to the cause on my Ko-fi account. Let me assure you, 100% of the donations will go towards the contest prizes for this year and next!

Please help all our writers out by telling everyone you know what is happening here and encouraging them to come vote.

This is WRiTE CLUB—the contest where the audience gets clobbered!


WRiTE CLUB 2021 - Preliminary Bout #14


Just four more contestants to reveal in these last two preliminary bouts. Who will make it into the ring?

Here's a reminder of what is happening. WRiTE CLUB (sponsored by Wild Lark Books) is a tournament-style contest that will run for nine weeks (which includes a week break for the holidays). It provides writers the opportunity to compete against one another for a chance to win a free publication package (along with other prizes). Here’s the kicker—it’s all done anonymously. Writers have submitted 500-word writing samples under pen names. The chosen (decided by a group of twelve slush pile readers) are paired off to go head-to-head in daily “bouts”, with the winner of each match determined by you the reader—by voting for your favorites. Bout winners keep advancing until there are only two remaining and that’s when a panel of celebrity judges, who include well know authors, agents, editors, and other publishing folks, choose the ultimate champion.

Anyone can vote (as long as you have a Google sign-in or verifiable email address), and when you do, we encourage you to leave a mini-critique for both writers. Oh, the voters can win a $50 Wild Lark Books gift card. Each time you vote in a bout your name will be placed into a hat and at the end of the contest, one name will be selected to receive the prize.

How this works—two anonymous (pen name only) writing samples are waiting in the ring below. Visitors to this blog (that’s you) should read both entries and then vote by leaving a comment for the one that resonates with you the most. We also ask that you leave a brief critique for both writers with your vote because that is one of the real values of this contest—FEEDBACK. Please be respectful with your remarks!

Even though there will be a different bout every day (M-F), the voting for each bout will remain open for seven days from the date I post it to give as many people as possible to have a say. Voting for today’s bout will close on Wed, Jan 5th (noon central time). To help keep up with which bouts are open, you can follow along on the WRiTE CLUB Scoreboard updated right HERE.

It’s that simple. The writing piece that garnishes the most votes will move on to the next round where they’ll face a different opponent. In case of a tie, I’m the deciding vote. I can do that because, like all of you, I do not know the real names of our contestants either (my wife processes all the submissions).

A few more rules –

1) One vote per visitor per bout.

2) Although our contestants are anonymous, voters cannot be. Anonymous votes will not count, so if you do not have a Google account and are voting as a guest, be sure to include your name and email address.

3) Using any method (email, social media, text, etc) to solicit votes for a specific contestant will cause that contestant's immediate disqualification. What is okay, in fact, encouraged, is to spread the word about the contest to get more people to vote, just not for a specific writer!

That’s enough of the fine print…here we go!



On one side of the ring stands MIM representing the Short Story genre.

Driving Me Crazy

“Get off in Sandnes,” she says. 

The website for the Statens Vegvesen, the Norwegian DPS, calls her a “test sensor.” I call her—this khaki-uniformed woman who holds my vehicular fate in her hands—the Ice Queen. Queenie, for short.

The ten minutes since I pulled out of the Stavanger motor vehicle bureau have been chilly, and nothing’s wrong with the sedan’s heat. Yep, it’s Queenie. You know the type—pruny face, glacial eyes, and Grinchy heart. 

I have fifty more minutes to melt Queenie with my red-hot driving skills and snag that Norwegian driver’s license. If I don’t--well, let’s not think about that.

I am piloting Queenie smoothly, steadily, and moderately southeast on the motorway when she tells me to exit in Sandnes. Seems to me Sandnes has four exits. Queenie’s going to have to cough up more info. “Which Sandnes exit? This one?” I say, gesturing toward the blue highway sign approaching us. 

Then I reconsider. Waving one hand around during a driving test—could look reckless. I slide it back to the two o’clock position and act casual.

“Do you mean the Sandnes sentrum exit?” I ask. 

Ja,” she says, scribbling on her clipboard. 

Not that rabbit warren. Crap! 

Downtown Sandnes is the cutest for shopping, strolling on the brick-paved pedestrian mall lined with boutiques. For driving, though, its criss-crossing streets are nothing but a tangled mass of potential accidents. Cyclists and baby strollers and walkers and parallel parkers and a bunch of fun-sized roundabouts—you follow me, don’t you?

All the ex-pats here have PTSD from the Sandnes-hell test portion. “I was clenching the steering wheel and going about 10 miles an hour,” said Debbie, the runner from Colorado. (Does she mean 10 kilometers an hour? I never can tell.)

Jana told me, “I was trying to turn left, but I couldn’t get the green arrow. My shirt was sticking to my back—sweat just streaming down, you know? And the test guy kept trying to talk to me.” She’s from Houston, like me.  She failed the test, like I’m about to. 

Since my family and I moved to Norway in May, I’ve been coping with culture shock. It comes in trickles sometimes, storm surges other times. When I’m on the Stavanger roads and behind the wheel, it’s like I’m up to my neck in the deep, dark fjord.  

“Turn at the next right,” says Queenie.

“By the apotek?” I ask. 

She brushes something (probably fake) off her coat sleeve and exhales. “Is that the next right?”

Honestly, I don’t know. As I’ve learned recently, the “next right” could be the drugstore. Also, it could be a dead-end alley barely wider than a Gremlin. Reversing in such a situation really gets your heart pumping. 

In any case, I turn right. 

“Drive up the hill,” says Queenie. “Continue straight on at the intersection.”

I approach. I decelerate. Looks like I’ve reached the end of my ride. 

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On the far side of the ring, we have Storyweaver who represents the Fantasy genre.


The dark stone was a canvas, calling to Harriett as she ran her fingers over the textured surface.  She closed her eyes, letting her consciousness drift into the blocks, sensing the form it would take tonight.  Her lips curved up as the stone recalled great cliffs and a roaring waterfall.  The image of a rainbow over the cascade burned her eyelids, providing inspiration to start.

Gently, she set her backpack on the ground, sparing a quick glance around the alley before tugging he zipper.  Inside, sixteen cans of spray paint stood at attention.  Her heart swelled with pride every time she opened her specially designed pack, inside crisscrossed with layers of fabric to create a sleeve for each can, keeping them protected, and most importantly, quiet.

Harriet selected red - her favorite color.  A quick, curved motion and an arch appeared on the stone in front of her.  More colors followed; each building the rainbow she had seen.

She didn’t stop there.  Blue and white swirled together under the rainbow to create foaming water.  With a sharp turn, it cascaded into a pool of water, ripples billowing out to a border of rocks, coated in moss.  With a touch of gray, Harriett highlighted the stones, creating the illusion of cliffs containing the massive flow of water.

The sound of the midnight bus reminded her to hurry.  Green became a meadow, bright spots of color for flowers dotting the expanse.  She debated adding fish jumping out of the pool, but there wasn’t time.  Tucking her materials into their sleeves, Harriett stepped back to review her work.  Still a bit rough around the edges, but it would do.

Shouldering her backpack, she checked to ensure the coast was clear before placing both hands on the picture.  Eyes squeezed shut, she felt the magic running through her palms and into the stone.  She felt it awaken, slight stirrings underneath her fingertips.  Holding the image of a cliff in her mind, she released the stones from the mortar, infusing them with the memories of their former glory.

Done.  She stepped back.  To the untrained eye, the overpass looked much the same as before.  Her soul felt the excitement of the wall, as it began to shift to a new form – reshaping into the cliff from her painting.

Experience told her it would take two days for the structure to collapse, and a week at least to recreate the landscape she had created.  Plenty of time for authorities to recognize the painting and reroute traffic off the now condemned bridge.

Realizing she had forgotten to sign, Harriett reached over her shoulder for the red.  She gave the can a few good shakes as she surveyed the landscape, deciding what to name it.  With a smile, she held down the sprayer and added a few words beneath the green meadow and rippling pool:

Fall of Water by Preservationist

Tucking everything away, she sprinted down the alley, paint cans as silent as her soft soled shoes.

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Leave your votes and critiques in the comments below. Again, be respectful of your remarks and try to point out positives as well as detractions.

Finally, in order to keep this contest going AND GROWING, I'm asking folks to donate to the cause on my Ko-fi account. Let me assure you, 100% of the donations will go towards the contest prizes for this year and next!

We’ll be back tomorrow with the final preliminary bout. Please help all our writers out by telling everyone you know what is happening here and encouraging them to come vote.

This is WRiTE CLUB—the contest where the audience gets clobbered!


WRiTE CLUB 2021 - Preliminary Bout #13



The number thirteen maybe be considered unlucky by some, but for two writers it's anything but. Here is today's next preliminary bout. 

The voting for each of these bout remains open for an entire week, so if you missed one or two you can always go back and catch up.

Recap: WRiTE CLUB (sponsored by Wild Lark Books) is a tournament-style contest that will run for nine weeks (which includes a week break for the holidays). It provides writers the opportunity to compete against one another for a chance to win a free publication package (along with other prizes). Here’s the kicker—it’s all done anonymously. Writers have submitted 500-word writing samples under pen names. The chosen (decided by a group of twelve slush pile readers) are paired off to go head-to-head in daily “bouts”, with the winner of each match determined by you the reader—by voting for your favorites. Bout winners keep advancing until there are only two remaining and that’s when a panel of celebrity judges, who include well know authors, agents, editors, and other publishing folks, choose the ultimate champion.

Anyone can vote (as long as you have a Google sign-in or verifiable email address), and when you do, we encourage you to leave a mini-critique for both writers. Oh, the voters can win a $50 Wild Lark Books gift card. Each time you vote in a bout your name will be placed into a hat and at the end of the contest, one name will be selected to receive the prize.

How this works—two anonymous (pen name only) writing samples are waiting in the ring below. Visitors to this blog (that’s you) should read both entries and then vote by leaving a comment for the one that resonates with you the most. We also ask that you leave a brief critique for both writers with your vote because that is one of the real values of this contest—FEEDBACK. Please be respectful with your remarks!

Even though there will be a different bout every day (M-F), the voting for each bout will remain open for seven days from the date I post it to give as many people as possible to have a say. Voting for today’s bout will close on Tue, Jan 4th (noon central time). To help keep up with which bouts are open, you can follow along on the WRiTE CLUB Scoreboard updated right HERE.

It’s that simple. The writing piece that garnishes the most votes will move on to the next round where they’ll face a different opponent. In case of a tie, I’m the deciding vote. I can do that because, like all of you, I do not know the real names of our contestants either (my wife processes all the submissions).

A few more rules –

1) One vote per visitor per bout.

2) Although our contestants are anonymous, voters cannot be. Anonymous votes will not count, so if you do not have a Google account and are voting as a guest, be sure to include your name and email address.

3) Using any method (email, social media, text, etc) to solicit votes for a specific contestant will cause that contestant's immediate disqualification. What is okay, in fact, encouraged, is to spread the word about the contest to get more people to vote, just not for a specific writer!

That’s enough of the fine print…here we go!



On one side of the ring stands Dark Stormy representing the Romance genre.

It is unusually cold for a summer day, even for San Francisco. He sits by the window, rubbing his hands together to warm them. He has been waiting for her nearly an hour. She is never late and he is concerned. Finally she walks through the door. He rushes to her side.

“June?” he asks, his mouth agape.

“I came in her place.”

“She never told me she had a twin. Is she ok?” Jack reaches out to touch her arm in concern. She averts it deftly, leaving his hand to continue its arc through the air, coming down empty.

She shrugs. “Yeah.”  She nods at the counter. “So…Are we just going to stand here or…?”

“Oh, yeah. What would you like?”

“Coffee, black. None of that fancy shit, just regular French Roast.”

He shakes his head as if there were a fly buzzing around his ear. June, with her skinny Orgeat lattes and Pollyanna speech is nothing like her sister. If he weren’t staring into the face of his girlfriend, he wouldn’t even believe they were related. He heads for the counter as January makes for a table in the corner of the indie beatnik coffee shop.

She is wearing torn black jeans, tight against her slender body, a chunky black belt with three rows of grommets all the way around and a black ribbed tank top. It’s obvious she isn’t wearing a bra. She dares anyone to stare.

Jack hurries over with the coffees. He sits, puts his cup on the small, circular marble topped table and extends the other out to January. She stares at him intently, and makes no move for the disposable paper cup so he places it on the table in front of her.

 “So….?” He starts, returning her gaze. Even with the charcoal shadow and heavy black eyeliner he sees June’s icy blue eyes staring back at him. Strange, he thinks, that ice blue never came to mind before. June’s are warm, like shallow pool water in August.

She cuts him off. “I came to tell you it’s over. Don’t call June again.” She stands up and grabs a handful of his shirt, puts her face so close to his she can smell the cologne wafting off his neck, sweet oak and heavy pine, like a jazzy Christmas. She’s almost tempted to nuzzle in and breathe deeply. Almost.

 It’s time this comes to an end. At almost two months of dating, this “boyfriend” of June’s has already been in the picture too long. She doesn’t like and therefore doesn’t allow anyone to get too close to June.

“Ever!” She shouts as she releases the crumpled shirt, using his chest to push off like an Olympic swimmer using the side of the pool for a kick turn. She turns on her heel and walks out.

Jack gazes down into the umber liquid and pretends not to notice the other patrons watching the scene. We’ll see.

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On the far side of the ring, we have Axis who represents the Realism genre.


Tilt Toward Me

 

The April sunset lengthened across the horizon in a bright lavender band and then suddenly burned out, snuffed by the passing storm. Winter’s desperate grasping covered the lake, the dock, the opposite bank--all that I could see--in snow and ice. A flock of robins hopped around the yard as confusedly as I felt about the spring freeze, but by the evening I had welcomed the oddity.

I started a fire in the pit we made in February.

(Do you remember? After we dug the circle and lined it with smooth rock, how we chopped the white birch logs and piled them in stacks? You said, Will they be dry enough next winter? I pointed out how the wood had aged, how easy it was for us to cut them. Okay, let’s save them. Remember how you said that? Let’s save them.)

It took awhile, but the flames spread, and I prayed the fire would burn forever and the cold would hang on even though the spring air is bound to return tomorrow--for with the greening of the ground you’ve gone, and I can’t see far enough ahead to know when you’ll come back.

You will, won’t you? And we’ll sit here on the stones we dragged from the shoreline, and we’ll talk about the otter pups up the creek and how they grew so fast over the summer, and about the wonder of watching their rolling play. Yes, that’s right, and you’ll point out to me it isn’t really that long to be gone again, and how it’ll get easier for us.

Of course. We’ll get used to the cycle of your going and returning, the both of us will. Yet--why shouldn’t I embrace a day like this one? This storm of memory with hope twinkling in the hoarfrost?

Now the coals glow at my feet. They cover themselves in ash, and I have to stir them back to life. And if I focus on the orange, the deep surge of color that’s always folding into black, I can fool myself that soon you’ll let the screen door slam on your way to sit with me.

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Leave your votes and critiques in the comments below. Again, be respectful of your remarks and try to point out positives as well as detractions.

Finally, in order to keep this contest going AND GROWING, I'm asking folks to donate to the cause on my Ko-fi account. Let me assure you, 100% of the donations will go towards the contest prizes for this year and next!

We’ll be back tomorrow with bout #14. Please help all our writers out by telling everyone you know what is happening here and encouraging them to come vote.

This is WRiTE CLUB—the contest where the audience gets clobbered!


WRiTE CLUB 2021 - Preliminary Bout #12



The bouts continue - with just four more remaining. As a reminder, the voting for each bout remains open for an entire week, so if you missed one or two you can always go back and catch up.

Here's a reminder of what is happening. WRiTE CLUB (sponsored by Wild Lark Books) is a tournament-style contest that will run for nine weeks (which includes a week break for the holidays). It provides writers the opportunity to compete against one another for a chance to win a free publication package (along with other prizes). Here’s the kicker—it’s all done anonymously. Writers have submitted 500-word writing samples under pen names. The chosen (decided by a group of twelve slush pile readers) are paired off to go head-to-head in daily “bouts”, with the winner of each match determined by you the reader—by voting for your favorites. Bout winners keep advancing until there are only two remaining and that’s when a panel of celebrity judges, who include well know authors, agents, editors, and other publishing folks, choose the ultimate champion.

Anyone can vote (as long as you have a Google sign-in or verifiable email address), and when you do, we encourage you to leave a mini-critique for both writers. Oh, the voters can win a $50 Wild Lark Books gift card. Each time you vote in a bout your name will be placed into a hat and at the end of the contest, one name will be selected to receive the prize.

How this works—two anonymous (pen name only) writing samples are waiting in the ring below. Visitors to this blog (that’s you) should read both entries and then vote by leaving a comment for the one that resonates with you the most. We also ask that you leave a brief critique for both writers with your vote because that is one of the real values of this contest—FEEDBACK. Please be respectful with your remarks!

Even though there will be a different bout every day (M-F), the voting for each bout will remain open for seven days from the date I post it to give as many people as possible to have a say. Voting for today’s bout will close on Mon, Jan 3rd (noon central time). To help keep up with which bouts are open, you can follow along on the WRiTE CLUB Scoreboard updated right HERE.

It’s that simple. The writing piece that garnishes the most votes will move on to the next round where they’ll face a different opponent. In case of a tie, I’m the deciding vote. I can do that because, like all of you, I do not know the real names of our contestants either (my wife processes all the submissions).

A few more rules –

1) One vote per visitor per bout.

2) Although our contestants are anonymous, voters cannot be. Anonymous votes will not count, so if you do not have a Google account and are voting as a guest, be sure to include your name and email address.

3) Using any method (email, social media, text, etc) to solicit votes for a specific contestant will cause that contestant's immediate disqualification. What is okay, in fact, encouraged, is to spread the word about the contest to get more people to vote, just not for a specific writer!

That’s enough of the fine print…here we go!



On one side of the ring stands ch3ru representing the Sci-Fi genre.

“So, we should probably talk,” Leah says by way of greeting.

 She sits down with a tray-sized plate heaped with what looks like one of everything on the human-consumable menu, plus a few slices of bright orange fruit from some distant alien world. She starts cutting small, orderly squares from one section of her plate, elegant manners strangely at odds with the pile of carbohydrate-rich layers liberally soaked in with a sticky caramelized sugar syrup.

 “Um,” Sol begins intelligently. We should talk. A particularly charged human expression, and that is where Sol's knowledge ends. Why are emotions so complicated? Every time Sol thinks they've found a baseline, some new variable appears and changes the whole equation.

Something like Leah.

“Why don’t I start?” Leah says, after swallowing a bite of fruit. “I won’t lie—last night was pretty mind-blowing. That's probably an understatement, but it’s the only word I can think of right now. Also, I like someone who can beat me at cards, and doesn’t run out of things to say.”

“I’ve been told I have a tendency to ramble, actually,” Sol admits, feeling unbalanced. They run a quick diagnostic on their internal gyroscope, but the scan comes up normal. This isn’t how they expected the conversation to go.

“I didn’t mind. You’re passionate about your work, and you know I like the sound of your voice. But anyway.” Leah sets down her utensils and pushes the tray aside to lean forward, mirroring Sol’s posture. “I wouldn’t mind seeing you again, getting to know you better. Maybe see if this has somewhere to go, y’know? But this isn’t a one-way street. If last night is all you want, that’s fine with me too. No hard feelings, and we can still be friends."

Sol is listening, but… Her mouth. It glistens faintly from where the piece of fruit slid across her lips. Sol recalls the taste of lips, of her skin; the sight of her mismatched fingers on white keys; the sound of her laughter; neon lights painting her skin bright colors in the night; the way she patiently taught them the rules to one game after another; the ease of trading anecdotes, stellar cartography for musical studies, a childhood in the colonies for the solitary existence of android mission directives.

And neither of them ever seemed to get bored. All this and more, collected into a newly-formed partition set aside in Sol's memory banks just for her.

Sol reaches out to take her hand. Warm flesh and blood in cool, malleable plasteel. She’s smiling softly, as if she already knows what they're about to say. Perhaps she does, through that uncanny and unquantifiable method of human intuition.

"I think I like the sound of that. Seeing if this has somewhere to go," Sol says, and is glad to see Leah's smile widen. Her grip on their hand shifts she can lean in, and Sol follow's her lead, optics deactivating.

Her lips are just as sweet and soft as Sol remembers.

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On the far side of the ring, we have Battlestar Bear who represents the Fantasy genre.


He didn't have a destination in mind, but when Jael found himself on the catwalk of one of the three watchtower spires, he finally slowed himself to stand and look out across the great river that wound down from the Dark Mountains to the north. The sun was low across the foothills to the west, casting a warm glow across the cool stone railing.

Jael gripped the edge and leaned forward. The wind was wild at this height and he closed his eyes to listen to it as it whipped and whistled around his head. Autumn was fast approaching and there was a tang of wood smoke and leaves in the air. He breathed in deeply and reached for his power. It responded like an eager child, ready to come out and play.

He stood back from the rail and lifted his hands in front of him. Regealth had been trying to teach him how to meter the amount of magic he called forth.  "Little sips and tastes," the old mage had explained. Now, Jael raised his hands and called two wisps of blue electricity. The magic wound through his fingers, the tendrils of energy pulsing and crackling as they snaked over the backs of his hands.

He watched it, his eyes narrowing as he tried to gather it in his palms. The magic fought him and he grimaced, applying more focus. Some of the strands started to pool together, but others broke off and continued their strange game of chase around his fingers.

"Sky magic is always so temperamental," a lilting voice said from behind him.

Jael dropped his hands and the blue energy dissipated into the air like tiny lightning bolts. He turned to see a very young woman peek around the curve of the spire. She grinned.

"Ah," he breathed out, "you found me."

"Aye, my lord," she said, coming closer.

Jael held his hands back up in front of him.

"I don't know why it won't do what I wish," he murmured.

The young woman smiled again. She held one hand up, a crackling sphere of green energy sitting neatly in her palm.

"Sky magic is hardest because it is all around us," she began. The sphere flattened out and began to form a swirling disc.

"It is like a horse."

She drew her fingers together and pulled down, calling the disc to form a cyclone. The wind began to whip around them faster, as if reacting to her magic.

"You must stay in control so it will do as you ask."

Jael watched in wonder as she used her other hand to twirl above the spinning cyclone. Fine tendrils of energy spun out like glass, shimmering in the late afternoon sun. Then, with one swift move, she pulled her hands apart and the magic scattered like a fine mist that settled over them both and flickered away.

"Show off," Jael smirked.

"Regealth won't let me play like this when we study," Isabela chuckled.

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Leave your votes and critiques in the comments below. Again, be respectful of your remarks and try to point out positives as well as detractions.

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We’ll be back tomorrow with bout #13. Please help all our writers out by telling everyone you know what is happening here and encouraging them to come vote.

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WRiTE CLUB 2021 - Preliminary Bout #11



We're back!

I hope everyone enjoyed their holiday break, but now it's time to get back to business — and that business is selecting another bout winner.

We have five remaining preliminary matches this week, beginning with today. Remember, the voting for each bout remains open for an entire week.

Here's a reminder of what is happening. WRiTE CLUB (sponsored by Wild Lark Books) is a tournament-style contest that will run for nine weeks (which includes a week break for the holidays). It provides writers the opportunity to compete against one another for a chance to win a free publication package (along with other prizes). Here’s the kicker—it’s all done anonymously. Writers have submitted 500-word writing samples under pen names. The chosen (decided by a group of twelve slush pile readers) are paired off to go head-to-head in daily “bouts”, with the winner of each match determined by you the reader—by voting for your favorites. Bout winners keep advancing until there are only two remaining and that’s when a panel of celebrity judges, who include well know authors, agents, editors, and other publishing folks, choose the ultimate champion.

Anyone can vote (as long as you have a Google sign-in or verifiable email address), and when you do, we encourage you to leave a mini-critique for both writers. Oh, the voters can win a $50 Wild Lark Books gift card. Each time you vote in a bout your name will be placed into a hat and at the end of the contest, one name will be selected to receive the prize.

How this works—two anonymous (pen name only) writing samples are waiting in the ring below. Visitors to this blog (that’s you) should read both entries and then vote by leaving a comment for the one that resonates with you the most. We also ask that you leave a brief critique for both writers with your vote because that is one of the real values of this contest—FEEDBACK. Please be respectful with your remarks!

Even though there will be a different bout every day (M-F), the voting for each bout will remain open for seven days from the date I post it to give as many people as possible to have a say. Voting for today’s bout will close on Sun, Jan 2nd (noon central time). To help keep up with which bouts are open, you can follow along on the WRiTE CLUB Scoreboard updated right HERE.

It’s that simple. The writing piece that garnishes the most votes will move on to the next round where they’ll face a different opponent. In case of a tie, I’m the deciding vote. I can do that because, like all of you, I do not know the real names of our contestants either (my wife processes all the submissions).

A few more rules –

1) One vote per visitor per bout.

2) Although our contestants are anonymous, voters cannot be. Anonymous votes will not count, so if you do not have a Google account and are voting as a guest, be sure to include your name and email address.

3) Using any method (email, social media, text, etc) to solicit votes for a specific contestant will cause that contestant's immediate disqualification. What is okay, in fact, encouraged, is to spread the word about the contest to get more people to vote, just not for a specific writer!

That’s enough of the fine print…here we go!



On one side of the ring stands The Sparky One representing the Contemporary genre.

I sat on the cold concrete floor in shock.  Had Iris hit me?  I wasn’t sure if I was more shocked by the violence with which she’d touched me or the words she’d flung my way. 

 “I’m sorry,” she stammered and reached out a hand to help me up from the puddle I’d collapsed into on the floor.

 I ignored the hand.  Did she really think a gesture like that was enough?  Pain sliced through me, so acute I couldn’t even tell if it was real, physical pain from falling, or the agony her words had caused.  How could I have been so foolish?  I wanted to kick myself for thinking I could change her mind.

 “Juliet…. Please?”  She looked at me and I could see the pain and confusion in her eyes.  The longing and the fear.

 I climbed to my feet, a little shaky, but uninjured.  Except for my soul that felt as if it had been torn into a thousand tiny scraps and left to blow in the wind.  Pieces of myself seemed to drift away as I stood there.  “What?”  I asked finally.

 “This…  Whatever this is between us.  We can’t keep doing it.  It has to stop.”  The words felt dragged from Iris’s lips.  As if she didn’t want to say them any more than I wanted to hear them.  They felt heavy as they hung between us, tangible enough I could reach out and touch them.  I wished that was real.  I wanted to pick them up and fling them back at her.  I wanted them to wound her as deeply as they had wounded me.

 I swallowed hard.  I was not going to cry.  Not here, not now.  She could break my heart, but no way was I letting her have the satisfaction of seeing it, of knowing it. 

 I pushed past her and left the alcove.  Left her behind in the space that had once felt like the only safe place in a cruel and ignorant world.  A place where love had triumphed over bigotry and intolerance and willful misunderstanding.  A place that gave me far more solace than the church ever had.  God had never felt as present or tangible to me as he had when Iris and I squeezed together in that cramped alcove and showed each other the truth.

 I sob caught in my throat as I dashed up the stairs.  How had it ended like this?  I’d been so happy.  I hadn’t felt like that since middle school.  I thought I’d found my soulmate again, the person who made me complete.

But here I was, wrong.  And once again, I was alone.

 The bell rang and people drifted into the hallways, chattering and laughing as they hurried to class.  I drifted with them even though I couldn’t even remember what class I had next.  It didn’t seem important.  How could I focus on math or literature or French or biology when Iris had torn my heart to pieces?

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On the far side of the ring, we have Turin Turambar who represents the Romance genre.


Christianne jumped out as soon as the towtruck had pulled up before the garage. She didn’t wait to see which bay the driver dragged her useless car into but headed straight for the office door.

The sign on the frosted glass indicated the place would be closing in ten minutes. The streets were deserted. She was the only fool still out in Geneva’s old town this late on a weekday.

A tiny box of a lobby led directly onto a wide staircase. There was just space for a spindle-legged table holding a bowl of business cards and an umbrella stand perched by the bottom step. The place looked more like her oncologist’s than a mechanic’s entrance.

Both were equally unpleasant places at this hour. Of all the nights to be stranded by the roadside, the end of an exhausting day of testing was hardest to deal with. And there were still days of waiting to come, before she received her results.

“There is no luck,” she muttered, and trudged up the steps. “I’ll make my own way.”

At the top, she squared her shoulders and pushed into the office, perhaps more forcefully than she’d intended. The frosted glass rattled in its frame as the door swung shut behind her.

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Here was something new.

Rory looked up from unpacking his takeaway Thai and studied the latest arrival. He stayed open late on Wednesdays because he couldn’t very well go to the gym every night and being the only garage available brought in enough additional income to make it worth his while. Nothing on at home, in any case, since the divorce. He might as well eat his takeaway here as plonked on his sofa in front of the TV.

And the clients were marginally more interesting.

He stopped crinkling the plastic bag, still clutching a clump of chili sauce packets, and pretended to frown down at his phone as he studied the newcomer from under lowered lids. Tall – she was nearly half a foot taller than his wee receptionist Melisande – and about his age. Though as he neared 40, everyone had begun to look the same age, except for socialites – like his ex – stretched taut by facelifts. Anyone younger than 30 seemed like a kid. When had he gotten so middle-aged?

This woman didn’t look as dowdy as he felt. Her shoulders sagged as she leaned over to fill out the form Melisande handed over, and her hair had that end-of-day draggliness, but her mouth was soft, and turned up at the corners – life hadn’t given her a permanent frown. She was trim, too, though it was hard to tell under layers of winter clothing. But her legs were slim, long and tapering into lace-up calf boots with a slight heel. He had a sudden image of her striding up to him in those boots – and only those boots – and pushing him back into his chair.

“I’ve been a very bad boy, aye.”

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Leave your votes and critiques in the comments below. Again, be respectful of your remarks and try to point out positives as well as detractions.

Before we sign off, I wanted to address the issue a few readers are having with not being able to post comments, or having those comments show up as UNKNOWN even though they have a Google Account.  There are several things at play here. First, if you are using the Safari or Chrome browsers they have a known problem with Blogger and you have two choices. Switch to Firefox as a browser (I've never had a problem using it), or change the setting on Safari as illustrated below.

The other problem is Blogger not recognizing you when adding a comment and therefore designating you as UNKNOWN. This could happen if the reader is a Blogger user themselves and they have not changed their settings since Google + went away.  To do this, follow these steps:

Go to Blogger dashboard.
SETTINGS
USER SETTINGS
Set User Profile = Blogger (instead of Google +)
Save


Hopefully, that will resolve everyone's issues and let the votes/comments reach our contestants.

Finally, in order to keep this contest going AND GROWING, I'm asking folks to donate to the cause on my Ko-fi account. Let me assure you, 100% of the donations will go towards the contest prizes for this year and next!

We’ll be back tomorrow with bout #12. Please help all our writers out by telling everyone you know what is happening here and encouraging them to come vote.

This is WRiTE CLUB—the contest where the audience gets clobbered!


 

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