Now that’s what I call a name. Just say it out
loud…Remington Steele. It just rolls off
your tongue, doesn’t it? And the name was so perfectly suited for its intended
purpose. For those of you who might be unfamiliar, Remington Steele was an
American television series, starring Stephanie Zimbalist and Pierce Brosnan,
first broadcast on the NBC network from 1982 to 1987. The series blended the
genres of romantic comedy, drama, and detective procedural. The premise was that
Laura Holt, a licensed private detective played by Stephanie Zimbalist, opened
a detective agency under her own name but found that potential clients refused
to hire a woman, however qualified. To solve the problem, Laura invents a
fictitious male superior whom she names Remington
Steele. Through a series of events Pierce Brosnan's character, a former
thief and con man whose real name is never revealed, assumes the identity of
Remington Steele. Behind the scenes, a power struggle ensues between Laura and
Mr. Steele as to who is really in charge, whilst the two carry on a casual
romantic relationship.
Let’s get back to the name (because that’s really my
topic of discussion today) and everything it conveys. Strength, stability,
decisiveness, upper class, controlling personality, to name just a few that
come to mind. And that’s the point, isn’t it? Laura Holt’s character (and the
show writers) chose that specific name to imbue those traits on a figurehead to
bring in clients, but over the course of the show we watch as the Pierce
Brosnan character tries to live up to those characteristics – with both comedic
and heartfelt results – while at the same time slowly bending perception to
match his own.
When we’re choosing names for our own characters, does
the same amount of forethought go into our choices? I’m betting your answer is
yes. Heck…some of us have even taken a pseudonym to publish under because our
own name isn’t “catchy” enough. Think about it…would Catching Fire have sold as many books if Katniss were named Sally instead? Or what if Tris
from Divergent was named Linda? I’m not trying to say that character names
make or break a book – good writing is good writing no matter what names they
use – but I do believe it can be impactful.
But there are times when I feel writers try too hard
with the names they pin on their characters. I recently finished a trilogy
where the main character was called ‘Jazz’ – and he was a boy. Personally, I
associate that nickname with a girl and by the end of the series I found his
name almost a distraction, especially when other characters starting pointing
out that he had a girl name. To me, this
was a case where the writer could have settled for something more mainstream
and delivered a superior read.
In my first two books (Mystery/Thriller) my character
names were really pedestrian. Lee, Dianne, Billy, Kent, Raymond. See what I mean. I didn’t really put that
much effort into the names for those because, frankly, I wasn’t sure anybody
else besides my immediate family would ever read them. But for my latest effort
– Moving Fear (YA
Paranormal/Mystery), the one that helped me land an agent, it was different. So
much so that my main character ended up with two names. His given name is
Chace…but he’s fifteen years old…rebellious…and upset that his father has
remarried so soon after losing his mother to cancer. He decides to go by his
middle name (Knox) so his step-mom won’t call him by the name his real mother
used. His sisters and grandma refuse to buy-in to what they deem is an adolescent
tantrum and adopt the change, but others just go along…or don’t know any
better. The name becomes more than an
identifier – it becomes a way to drive conflict.
What about you?
What was your thought process behind how you named your characters? Was
there one? Do you think there are any trends in current literature that involve
character names?
Remington Steele was a great show. And yes, a great name.
ReplyDeleteWhile the main characters of my books were chosen years ago, secondary characters were chosen quickly I'm afraid. I just brainstormed a bunch of science fiction names and matched them up in less than thirty minutes. My upcoming book took more effort and thought, as the names had to have a British flair.
Ah...a british flair...like Rueben? :)
DeleteMy characters usually come with names. Sometimes I'll have to try on a few different ones, but I usually know for sure by page five. Now, book titles, that's very different :)
ReplyDeleteYou'll have to teach me how to do that. :)
DeleteI loved Remington Steele! And, you're right, names matter. My hubby is always happy with I write contemporary instead of SF. That way, as he says, the names are "normal". But normal in in the eye of the reader, isn't it? ;-)
ReplyDeleteYes...some of the names in Sci-Fi are out there! :)
DeleteI usually spend a fair amount of time choosing my characters' names. The name has to fit them culturally, or make sense for them for some reason. I often delve into meanings and own a great book that has names listed by country of origin, which is pretty cool. However, in my current WIP, one of my characters chose her name. It wasn't a name I would've chosen, nor is one she would've chosen, but somehow it suits her.
ReplyDeleteI loved Remington Steele, and Pierce Brosnan ;)
I find it funny how much time we devote to names sometimes! :)
DeleteA lot my character's names come from family members. Distant family members. They just seem to fit. Other times, the names just come to me. However, I had one character, Annie Wolf, where the first name was fine, but the last name wasn't working. Then I went to a baseball game (love my Dayton Dragons). A player went up to bat. Annie yelled at me (yes, yelled!) that THAT was her last name. And Annie O'Shea was born! Of course, I used my late uncle's name for her brother: Eric McClellan (nicknamed Mac--in the book and real life). I just love using family names! :)
ReplyDeleteOh, and I loved Remington Steele when it first came on. Until my husband decided to watch the series on DVDs recently. I didn't remember them being so...corny. Kind of spoiled my memory. :(
Yeah...some of the old shows just don't hold up...at least as what we built them up to be. :)
DeleteI love the images or impressions that names can give of a person! I do think, though, that we can be biased by previous experiences or people we know/used to know, or even characters from other books with the same name. So that we come to a new name with preconceived notions and it doesn't sit quite right for this new character, etc. I try to be open-minded no matter what a character's name is. It's their personality that is most important for me; if the name fits/suits them, all the better!
ReplyDeleteGood viewpoint. It's hard not to bring our baggage with us sometimes. :)
DeleteMost of the names I chose came from the Bible. I wanted them to be very solid.
ReplyDeleteYou know, I've never watched Remington Steele.
Sorry you missed out on it. :)
DeleteI never heard of Remington Steele, but that's a great name! I always think real hard about my characters names.For one of my unpublished series, I especially got creative with the names. There's nothing I love more than naming a character. :)
ReplyDeleteYou can have so much fun with it. One of the characters in my book (a bully) is called Tug -- and I had a blast coming up with the backstory to how he received that nickname. :)
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ReplyDeleteI just stopped by to check out your blog. I've signed up for yet another year of the A to Z Challenge and look forward to reading many, many posts next month...;~)
Take care,
Donna L Martin
www.donnalmartin.com
author of THE STORY CATCHER (Anaiah Press 2015)
coauthor CHICKEN SOUP FOR THE SOUL: ANGELS AMONG US (Simon & Schuster 2013)
I'm all ready to go...A-Z wise. :)
DeleteThe weird thing is that my characters come to me already named. When I first got the idea for Touch of Death, I heard a little voice in my head that said, "My name is Jodi Marshall." For The Monster Within, this tough girl told me to call her Sam, not Samantha. I just go with it. ;) I think I'd be at a loss if the names didn't just pop into my head this way.
ReplyDeleteOh, I should also mention that when I was pregnant with my daughter, and my husband and I were thinking of name, Ayla Noelle just popped in my head (much like with my characters) and I told my husband there was no need to pick names. Her name is Ayla Noelle. And it is. :)
DeleteI'm thinking that if you proposed a name like Thorn Blister Hashway -- he might have had a problem with that. :)
DeleteI can't say Remington Steele without thinking romance. As to my characters, they absolutely must have names that reflect their personalities and the story they inhabit. My most recents I love. Hutchinson (Hutch) McQueen had to be Double Negative's hero, and Cleopatra (Cleo) Brown had to be Sudden Secret's heroine.
ReplyDeleteHutch is a great name!! :)
DeleteI'm laughing here over the idea of Sally instead of Katniss, and Linda instead of Tris. And I remember Remington Steele fondly! What a fun show, even if it was sort of silly.
ReplyDeleteAs for character names, other than the main character (who nearly always pops into my head already named), I spend hours and hours, maybe months coming up with the "right" names for everyone else, combing through all those baby name sights for names that sound right or names with certain meanings. Even if the reader doesn't know what it means, I have to know!
So much time devoted to names...which on the surface seems like such an easy task. :)
DeleteOh, I remember loving that show - I'm going to have to look it up. Is it as good as I remember?
ReplyDeleteAnd the name is great! I admit that some of my names in my books came with great intent: Clara (MC - searching for a "clear" purpose and has "true, clear" purpose when she accepts her destiny), Stelia (a nickname for her mentor that combines her real name and reminds us that she's made of "steel" but she still a lady), and Dantor (I wanted his name to be based on Daniel from the Bible, but be different and infused with strength). Unfortunately, Dantor took a back seat in the first two books, and the lead guys - Adrian and Liam didn't have as much thought go into their names (agh), plus the twin griffin brothers names (Kryssander and Klyan) gave me fits because I kept mistyping them. I don't recommend ever using matching twin names.
Love what you did there with Clara. Nice! :)
DeleteI usually go with an ethnicity or culture and pick names from there, possibly altering them to make them sound more fantasy-y
ReplyDeleteLOL! Making them sound more fantasy-y! :)
DeleteI enjoyed Remington Steele all those years ago - fun memories! :)
ReplyDeleteNames are so important. I love Knox's choice and the reason behind it. I'm careful with my character names too - they convey so much!
Thank you! :)
DeleteKatniss as Sally? *shudders* ;) I actually don't like it when you can tell names have been chosen b/c they go w/who the character is, or who they end up being. And not b/c their parents knew and named them that, but b/c the author found out a certain name means something and goes along well w/what they're writing about, and so they pick it for that reasons. Ugh, I'm doing horrible at explaining what I mean, so I'll just stop. =D
ReplyDeleteIt does standout sometimes when names are "forced". Usually the writing doesn't need the extra push. :)
DeleteNames are really important. I grew up always being one of 5 or 6 Kates in my classes at school. So when I had kids of my own, I chose unusual names for them so they wouldn't have to be one of many…. They'll probably hate me for it when they're older and ask why I didn't name them Steve or Joe.
ReplyDeleteNow I have to know what your nickname was?? :)
Deletehaha Sally! great post and I'm currently going through a lot of name obsessiveness with my characters. I normally just pick names that pop into my head, but sometimes halfway through I realize they don't fit...like my love interest has been Brady forever but now I'm leaning toward Jason...but I just read a string of books where the LI was Jason or Jase...so I'll prob change it again..lol
ReplyDeleteLOL!! I feel your pain. :)
DeleteThat was the perfect name for a fictional detective, wasn't it? The characters was designed to be James Bond-like, from what I recall...so when Pierce Brosnan was chosen as James Bond, I thought, "Hasn't he already done that role?!"
ReplyDeleteExactly!!! :)
DeleteRemington Steele what a great example. I get a headache at times trying to pronounce (even if only in my mind) and remember the names some authors choose. In my current WIP the two MC's are plain ordinary people, so I used plain ordinary names. I wanted their story to be extraordinary, not their names. I guess we'll have to wait and see how that works out for me
ReplyDeleteAnd that's the way it really should be. Good luck with that! :)
DeleteNever saw the show but I agree that Remington Steele was an ingenious name for the character. When I've come up with names I've usually riffed off names of people I've known or characters from books or stories that I've liked.
ReplyDeleteArlee Bird
A to Z Challenge Co-host
Tossing It Out
People I know or known are usually my first choice also. :)
DeleteRemington Steele reminds me of a men's shaver. Ah, I see why - a quick Google search tells me it's Remington Steel (no 'e' on the end). I usually write non-fiction when I tap into my creativity so I keep the names as is, but I am working on a non-fiction project where I need to change the names. It's a humour piece so after reading this post, I'm really going to think about the character names I come up with! Sally Everdeen for the win!
ReplyDeleteMaking up names when writing non-fiction...probably not a good thing. :)
DeleteHi Don - I used to love the Show - completely naff .. but amusing and relaxing. I can see your point re the name - and I do get frustrated with a character's name - it's just not right .. and I can't quite fathom why that person is called Susan - when others have dynamic names ... I think a tv show, or a book should have names that reflect appropriately .. makes it easier to digest ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteSome of those Sci-fi names are really hard to process. They slow me down. :)
DeleteThe worst naming advice I can think of was given by the late editor Olga Litowinsky, who recommended naming your characters currently popular names. One, that presupposes you're writing a contemporary set in North America, and two, that's a surefire way to quickly date a book. It's not realistic for every single person born in a certain era to have Top 100 names. We've all known people with outlier names, names which were a lot more popular in previous eras, names which have never cracked the Top 1000, or names which are more common on children under the age of ten than older people. My naming style tends towards classical eccentric and classical unusual, historical names which aren't so popular anymore (e.g., Justine, Felix) and names which are enjoying an increasing wave of visibility or popularity (Beatrice, Ezra). I tend to use more common or popular names for secondary or minor characters. Characters with lesser-used names, within reason, tend to be more memorable than yet another John Smith or Mary Jones. I also like to use less-popular names for my characters from other cultures.
ReplyDeleteI agree -- very bad advice. Lesser known names are a much safer bet. :)
DeleteRemington Steele! I'd forgotten about that show. Great premise. And name. Yeah, names are important to me. And I get very upset at myself when I choose one that suddenly becomes popular in current fiction. I went back and changed the name of one of my MC's when I saw his name showing up in novel after novel. Hmph! You want to a name to be relatable, memorable, but not so common that people see it everywhere.
ReplyDeleteExactly! It should stand out...but in a good way. :)
DeleteI'd love to find Remington Steele floating around in syndication somewhere. It was a fun show. Sometimes I struggle for the right name. Other characters arrive in my head already named and refuse to let me change it.
ReplyDeleteStubbornness must run in your fictional family! :)
DeleteHey, before I forget, I had to read part two of "The Chronicle" and I can't wait to read Part three one of these days :)
ReplyDeleteFor me, I tend to go with the bland, normal names... and mainly because of the "Jazz effect" (and also because when I grew up in Oirland, there were no "odd" names... in my gang of nine, there were four Marks, two Alans, a Dave, Liam and a Peter :)
PS: I think it's hilarious your novel is called MOVING FEAR ... I'm living it now, mate :)
Watch out for a strange black box! DON'T OPEN IT! :)
DeleteNever seen that show but it's a great name. It sounds debonair. I do think names are really important especially if you can create an impression of a character even before the reader knows much about them. Of course it might be fun to subvert that expectation too. I enjoyed making up my own names for my futuristic dystopian because regular names definitely wouldn't have fitted.
ReplyDeleteGreat idea...subverting expectations would be a cool tool. Like naming a 98 pound weakling Brock! :)
DeleteI remember Remington Steele. Loved that show. I do put a lot of thought into my character's name. More so than I probably spent coming up with names for my kids.
ReplyDeleteI loved Remington Steele. I also love James Bond. You can imagine my excitement when Pierce Brosnan was first mentioned as a potential James Bond. Timothy Dalton got the nod due to difficulties getting Pierce and I feel there was an opportunity lost. I cannot say Brosnan's turns as the British super spy were among my favorite movies.
ReplyDeleteI loved Remington Steele. I also love James Bond. You can imagine my excitement when Pierce Brosnan was first mentioned as a potential James Bond. Timothy Dalton got the nod due to difficulties getting Pierce and I feel there was an opportunity lost. I cannot say Brosnan's turns as the British super spy were among my favorite movies.
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