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WRiTE CLUB - The Quarter-Finals - Bout 1

The march continues and at it's inevitable conclusion, only one will remain.  This week we will tap two more to move on and set up the epic battle we've all been waiting for since November.  You've probably seen all four of these WRiTER's in action before, but just in case your new to WRiTE CLUB you can find a list of their previous bouts here

The first match-up, determined by a random drawing, is below.  Read each submission carefully and vote for the one that in your mind deserves to keep marching.  No, it is not an easy task...but it really shouldn't be.  Hairs will be split, deeper meanings will be contemplated, and even coins will be tossed, but a choice has to be made.

And so...

Welcome back to the ring in the far corner.....CASEY BROOKS

When a princess misbehaves, most kings and queens send them to their chambers. Not mine. No, my parents send me to the dungeons. And I don’t get to just sit there and “think about what I’ve done.” I have to clean. It probably says something about my temperament that we have the cleanest dungeons in all of Farfel. Even now, as I sat on my royal *ahem* and polished the bars outside the second-largest cell for VIPs only (Very Important Prisoners), I was hard pressed to find even one speck of dust. Of course, that might be because I’ve been on dungeon duty every day this week. (Let me just say – cleaning out chamber pots? Not. Fun.)

On Sunday, I was punished for putting a snake in Prince Alec’s salad. I know, I know. Not that original, but he yelled louder than a banshee from the Mountains of Mystery.

On Monday, I ever-so-innocently suggested that the prince resembled a blue pincushion – what with his puffy sleeves and all – and my parents sent me down here again. (Though, I noticed they didn’t disagree with my assessment of his outfit).

Tuesday morning, I pushed the prince into the fountain during our supposed-to-be-romantic walk. Of course my parents didn’t believe me when I said I was protecting the prince from a very deadly looking wasp.

Really, I was surprised they still wanted to go forward with the whole marriage thing. I mean, I had hoped that if I made my thoughts on the matter clear, then they would let me out of it. But, no.

Maybe the fountain thing was too subtle.

“Maybe the prince should just go back to where he belongs,” I muttered as I scrubbed at the prison bars. After all, my parents couldn’t force me to marry Prince Alec in one week.


“That’s easy to arrange, you know,” a lilting female voice answered me. I nearly jumped out of my corset.

Peering through the bars, I saw two baby blue eyes staring back at me. They reminded me of the prince’s unfortunately puffy coat. I hate to admit it, but I judged her a little bit because of that.

“I thought this cell was empty,” I said stupidly. I was too surprised to come up with something more witty.

“New arrival. Just got here today.” She seemed unconcerned by the fact that she was a prisoner in the king’s dungeons. Calmly and primly, she sat by the cell bars, looking at me with an expression that could only be described as boredom.

She was also the most beautiful woman I had ever seen.

I judged her for that too. It wasn’t fair that she could have lustrous golden hair that cascaded down her back in waves (even while as a prisoner in a dungeon!) while my lady maids forced me to sit for an hour each day simply to have a semblance of curl.

But if she could help me … who was I to judge?

And their opponent in the near corner...JAMIE STUART

Charlene Gentry didn't know what to expect when she died. She wasn't necessarily an evil person, so would heaven welcome her? She wasn't an angel, either, so would hell be her destination? Not that she had a choice, but she assumed those were her only two options.

Certainly not 5542 Sycamore Lane.

She must be dead. How else could she explain the view of her bedroom from above? She didn't own a mirror on the ceiling, as badly as she had dreamed of putting one up there. And the eyes of the body – her body – lying on the bed below were closed.

The front door slammed. "Charlie? You here?"

Robbie. Her big brother finally made it. Was he in time? How long had her body been lying there? Minutes? Hours?

"I'm in the bedroom!" She yelled, but did he hear her? Dammit! How could she move to him? Was she stuck up on the ceiling for all eternity?

The sliding door to the backyard opened. "Hey, fella. Whatcha doing out here?"

Barnaby's claws ticked, ticked, ticked, as they skittered across the kitchen floor. Soon the chocolate lab burst through the bedroom door, Robbie close behind.

"Charlie?" He rushed to her body and placed his fingers against the neck.

Did he get a pulse? Was she still alive? He pulled out his cell.

"It's my sister. I think she OD'd."

"No, I didn't," she said. "It's not what you think."

"Fifty-five forty-two Sycamore Lane… No… Yes… Okay. Please hurry." He dropped the phone on the bed and proceeded to perform CPR. Barnaby whined.

"That's it. Resuscitate me. Bring me back, Robbie!"

After several pumps on her chest, he blew air into her mouth. He repeated the process and checked her neck. "Dammit, Charlie. Come back! Don't leave me."

She willed herself to be by his side, and it happened. So that's how it worked! "I haven't left you," she said. "Don't give up!"

He didn't react to her words, but he continued with the CPR.

Where was the ambulance? They should have been here by now. She only lived a couple of blocks away.

Robbie checked her neck again and started to cry.

"No! I don't want to die!" She reached out for him and her hand went through his body.

He didn't feel her. She was nothing.

"How could you be so stupid? I trusted you!" He fell to his knees and placed his head on the bed.

His sobs wrenched her heart, if she even had one anymore. She couldn't blame him. She was stupid. Not for overdosing – she'd been clean for a year – but for trusting Carl. That bastard had killed her.

She had never believed in ghosts before. Looked like she was one now. Was she stuck inside the house forever?

Oh crap. Maybe she was in hell.


  1. Jamie Stuart. Ouch, this hurts my head this morning having to choose.

  2. Voice is the thing that stands out for me in these two entries. Charlene gets my sympathy more than the naughty princess.

    The princess is snarky, and while that works sometimes, it doesn't work for me coming out of the gate. I don't know the princess at all, so she comes off as a little bratty. I'd send her to the dungeon, too!

    Charlene is sympathetic right away. You can't help but feel for her.

    So my vote goes to Jamie Stuart.

  3. I like the humor of the first one but my vote goes to the second.

  4. Very tough choice, but I vote for the first one -- Casey Brooks.

    The voice and the humor were enough to sway me.

  5. Having a hard time voting this morning. Don't cyber shoot me, but I'm holding off on voting. :( *head hurts; too much thinking

  6. My vote goes to Casey Brooks. I love the light-hearted humor!

  7. We're at the point where I'm going to have to choose based on what I'd feel like reading today... And today it's CASEY BROOKS!

    Great writing, guys~ :o) <3

  8. What's interesting here is that number two is usually the thing I would go for. But the voice in number one was too much to pass. My vote is for Casey! Nice work. :D

  9. I've always loved Casey Brooks. I'm going to stick with #1.

  10. My vote goes to the second! Congrats to both.

  11. It is really a hard choice but I will go for Jamie. They are both good. The second one grabs me more.

  12. Gah! Tough competition. My vote goes to Casey Brooks.

  13. Going to have to go with Casey Brooks. Jamie is hooking but in a different, scary, not cool way for me. Casey keep rocking it.

  14. Casey Brooks gets my vote. Jamie is hooking but in a different, scary and not good way for me. Keep rocking it Casey!

  15. Casey Brooks gets my vote today.

  16. I'm throwing a vote at Casey Brooks by the smallest sliver. Great excerpts by both authors - I've enjoyed reading them each time they've come up.

  17. Wow! Tough choice, but Jamie Stuart has my vote.

  18. Ugh, this is getting harder and harder! I love the snarky voice in the first one, but the drama and tension in the second does it for me. My vote is for Jamie Stuart.

  19. Hello all! I'm new to WRiTE Club but better late than never, right? This is so much fun. I'm going to vote for Casey Brooks, because that's one book I would definitely like to read. The other one was a little bit too "Lovely Bones" for my taste, and I'm not a huge fan of books like that, but both authors did a fabulous job. I hope there will be other competitions like this in the future so I can join in!

  20. Spotless dungeons? Gotta go with Casey Brooks.

  21. Jamie Stuart! I seriously want to

  22. Ooo they both make me want to keep reading, one for the humor and personality, the other for the suspense. I hope they both get published one day so I can read the whole thing.

    My vote goes to Casey Brooks.

  23. Can I still vote? If I can my vote goes to Jamie Stuart.

  24. Jaime Stuart was great, but I'm going to go for Casey Brooks.




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